高考英語滿分作文范文賞析

高考英語作文既考查學生的英語單詞詞匯量，也考查高中生對英語語法和句型的運用以及對高考英語作文題目的理解，因此寫出一篇優(yōu)秀的高考英語作文并不是一件容易的事。下文有途網小編給大家整理了《高考英語滿分作文范文賞析》，僅供參考!

高考英語滿分作文范文

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一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內容包括：

1.地點：距白山入口處500米;

2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費開放; 5.歡迎預定。

注意：1.詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

高考英語滿分作文名師點評

本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是應用了很多比較復雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結構交代賓館位置。which引導的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確?？偟貋碚f，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。

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高考英語作文題目

假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。

注意：

1.詞數：100左右：

2.參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours, Li Hua

高考英語滿分作文名師點評

本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用，還使用了以'which，’引導的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場佳作。

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